如何利用托福阅读备考托福写作(转载)

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官方Official阅读部分是一个非常好的语料库,虽然里边的内容大都是科普类的,或许很难直接搬到咱们的作文中,可是论证所需的词、短语、句式、甚至结构都是完全能够搬到咱们的写作中来的。

大家在做阅读的时候假如时刻答应,能够多去考虑一下,人家的文章结构是什么,每一段的打开的结构又是什么,有哪些结构、句式和表达式能够用到咱们写作中。

下面辛达带大家来看一下官方Official中出现过的经典语篇,非常适合拿来作为托福写作最初,让考官眼前一亮。



原文资料

These ideas remain controversial. Proponents point to features such as the terraced “beaches” shown in one image, which could conceivably have been left behind as a lake or ocean evaporated and the shoreline receded. But detractors maintain that the terraces could also have been created by geological activity, perhaps related to the geologic forces that depressed the Northern Hemisphere far below the level of the south, in which case they have nothing whatever to do with Martian water. [官方Official 8-3-4]



这些观点仍然存在争议。支持者们指出照片里显现的台地“海滩”或许是由湖泊或许海洋蒸发干涸之后或许海退之后构成的。可是反对者以为这些台地也或许是由于地质活动造成的,或许与使得北半球比南半球地形更低的地质力有关。在这种情况下,它们就和火星水系没有任何关系。



参考句式

The issue whether [转述标题] remains controversial. Proponents point to the benefits of A such as a1 and a2. But detractors maintain that its advantages pale in comparison to the drawbacks.

X 这个问题依然存在争议。支持者提出 A 的优点,比方 a1, a2。然而,反对者坚持以为 A 的优点和坏处比较不值得一提。

这个经典的句式能够作为最初的争议部分。咱们只需要在后面加一个标明态度的话就能够了。假如有兴趣前面也能够搞个背景。



参考练习

The issue whether governments should place economic development high on their list of priorities remains controversial. Proponents point to the benefits of a strong economy such as higher standard of living and lower unemployment rate. But detractors maintain that its advantages pale in comparison to the drawbacks.

ty_1448162482022-06-10 21:18:42 发布在 留学生涯